Would this yugioh deck hold up in a tournament ?? (rate/fix)?

ok, first of all, put in 2 more goku ens, there great without a tribute, you need 3 call of the mummy.It will give you strong zombies to swarm faster, take out giant trunade and put in heavy storm.get rid of jutte, and add a patrician of darkness, quite a useful effect, easy to bring out with pyramid.get rid of card trooper,(you dont need to mill too much as pyramid turtle supports all of your zombies) and add another red eyes if you can.